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Privacy Policy / GDPR / Code of Conduct Footer / Minor Changes #7

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@snaeker58 snaeker58 commented Sep 7, 2024

TODO: Actual code of conduct, making the
/ element thicc.

The Code of Conduct is based off the Contributor Covenant, which we were using previously.

open: Actual code of conduct, making the br element thicc.
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The tone is completely wrong. I understand it is a legal document, but we should aim to make it as understandable as possible because we deal with minors. ICO guidance is to make all legal text as easy to read as possible if your service is provided to minors.

Please rewrite in plain English.

See guidance on the right to be informed.

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@iamawatermelo iamawatermelo added this to the Production milestone Sep 7, 2024
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The tone is completely wrong. I understand it is a legal document, but we should aim to make it as understandable as possible because we deal with minors. ICO guidance is to make all legal text as easy to read as possible if your service is provided to minors.

Please rewrite in plain English.

See guidance on the right to be informed.

I disagree, please provide me with examples. You can easily determine what we collect, for what we use what we collect and how to delete it. You can also easily find out who we share the data with.

Most people that look at the privacy policy want to find a contact email for deletion. I hate when this is hard to find, but navigation to that section is easy and it is highlighted by the fact that it is separate.

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I am ready for another judging Sarah!!

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Please get rid of we'll, it does not make it easier to read but sound more informal.

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I already said this to you but putting it here so it is public:

We are not the government nor some Super Serious Organisation and I think our documents should reflect that. We're literally just a hackathon organised by a bunch of teens

I'm probably going to put that in the brand guidelines

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Actually much better than your og PP :D

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Added the code of conduct now! Take a look when you have time if you're happy with the layout

@iamawatermelo iamawatermelo added legal Legal documentation and removed documentation Improvements or additions to documentation labels Sep 10, 2024
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I've seen this and will review soon.

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SkyfallWasTaken commented Oct 28, 2024

@leowilkin Mind taking another look at this? LGTM but a second opinion would be great
(the commit below is me fixing the merge conflicts)

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