Changed some wording and styling.

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 .main-banner>img {
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+	width: 220px;
 	border: 4px solid black;
 	margin-bottom: 0.5rem;
 	align-self: center;

resume.html

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 						<p>
 							🧑‍🔬 Built tooling to <span class='light-gold'>evaluate the performance and
 								correctness</span> of
-							LinkedIn's new metrics platform (managed by a third-party), allowing the team to <span
-								class='light-gold'>debug</span>
+							LinkedIn's new metrics platform, allowing the team to <span class='light-gold'>debug</span>
 							and <span class='light-gold'>fix underlying
 								issues before migration</span>, as well as measure progress.
 						</p>
@@ -178,14 +177,14 @@
 								href="https://engineering.linkedin.com/teams/data/analytics-platform-apps/data-applications/t-rex">T-REX</a>).
 						</p>
 						<p>
-							🧪 Built functionality to incrementally deploy experiment definitions to our fleet while
-							monitoring application health signals,
+							🧪 Built functionality to incrementally deploy experiment definitions while
+							automatically evaluating their effects on application health signals,
 							<span class='light-gold'>reducing likelihood of incidents</span> from insufficiently
 							validated A/B test treatments.
 						</p>
 						<p>
-							📋 Created a GitHub Action to allow teams to manage their monitoring and alerting
-							infrastructure as code, facilitating <span class='light-gold'>better alerting practices
+							📋 Created a GitHub Action to allow teams to manage their dashboards and alerts as code,
+							facilitating <span class='light-gold'>better alerting practices
 								through code-review</span> as well as providing
 							discoverable examples to be leveraged by others, improving oncall
 							quality-of-life.
@@ -216,14 +215,14 @@
 							for application development.
 						</p>
 						<p>
-							🔧 Created a Python tool to automate deployments our main monolith as well as
-							other legacy C# applications, eliminating
+							🔧 Created a Python tool to automate safe deployments of our legacy C# applications
+							(including our main monolith), eliminating
 							<span class='light-gold'></span>
 							all deployment-related issues</span>. Included writing thorough documentation and
 							training
 							<span class='light-gold'>30+ developers</span> on tools
 							use, which allowed engineers to confidently and
-							safely deploy legacy code without fear of user
+							safely deploy new code without fear of user
 							impact.
 						</p>
 						<p>