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 								<h2 class="title-50" id="conclusion">Conclusion</h2>
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-									<p class="p1">The interplay between microchip technologies, political dynamics and
-										imperial ambitions prevents us from better understanding the materiality of
-										these
-										technologies and penetrating the power dynamic that creates layers of controlled
-										visibilities. Today we must come to terms with the relative lack of power in the
+									<p class="p1">The interplay between geopolitical dynamics, imperial ambitions, and material production to create technologies prevents a comprehensive understanding of the materiality of these technologies and hinders our ability to penetrate the power dynamics that produce layers of controlled visibility. Today we must come to terms with the relative lack of power in the
 										face of obscured systems. This essay surveys the landscape of the south-eastern
 										Ukraine thought the lens of past, post-industrial present and service-oriented
 										future. It is marked by the impact of colonialism on the landscape and its