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Improve description for Figure 1 #300

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Closes #268.

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Editors call notes:

  • Moving above the diagram is good clarity
  • Changing from defining the roles to the overall diagram caused some confusion.

If the PR can maintain the roles, and add diagram clarity, that would be preferred.

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Address the editors meeting feedback with some proposals to

  • Move the roles definition above the diagram
  • Reflect the current diagram capabilities

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LGTM

@SteveLasker SteveLasker merged commit af8a14c into main Oct 1, 2024
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