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Clean-up looks good to me, with a few nits here and there.

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@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ After that you will be provided with the credentials to access the software on [
In order to use the software, log in to the registry using the following command:

```bash
docker login ghcr.io
docker login ghcr.io --username provided_user_name --password provided_token_string
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why not using prompt?

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I am guessing that people will like to use the copy paste. But I am flexible.

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It doesn't matter much here - these blocks are console output, because they contain both commands and their output. However, we won't get the highlight for commands, because the core@control-1 prefix in front of the prompt symbol and commands prevents GitHub to recognise the commands.

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So I have been looking at the docs as rendered via make serve I did that mass removal to avoid numbers in the output being colored for reasons I couldn't easily deduce. For examples the first 10 in the ip addresses. The rendering in GitHub is something that I have only started looking at because of this comment. Are you okay with a policy of, no console tag at all since the rendering seems to be spotty be between material-mkdocs and github?

docker login ghcr.io --username provided_username --password provided_token
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Hedgehog maintains a utility to install and configure VLAB, called `hhfab`. To install:
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Hedgehog maintains a utility to install and configure VLAB, called hhfab.

I'd move that to the top of the subsection, before mentioning the token required to download this hhfab you mention :)

Also s/github/GitHub/

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