Updated LICENSE (#111)

Fixed typos and grammatical mistakes

LICENSE

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
       the copyright owner that is granting the License.
 
       "Legal Entity" shall mean the union of the acting entity and all
-      other entities that control, are controlled by, or are under common
+      other entities that control, are controlled by or are under common
       control with that entity. For the purposes of this definition,
       "control" means (i) the power, direct or indirect, to cause the
       direction or management of such entity, whether by contract or
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
 
       "Work" shall mean the work of authorship, whether in Source or
       Object form, made available under the License, as indicated by a
-      copyright notice that is included in or attached to the work
+      the copyright notice that is included in or attached to the work
       (an example is provided in the Appendix below).
 
       "Derivative Works" shall mean any work, whether in Source or Object
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
       to that Work or Derivative Works thereof, that is intentionally
       submitted to Licensor for inclusion in the Work by the copyright owner
       or by an individual or Legal Entity authorized to submit on behalf of
-      the copyright owner. For the purposes of this definition, "submitted"
+      the copyright owner. For this definition, "submitted"
       means any form of electronic, verbal, or written communication sent
       to the Licensor or its representatives, including but not limited to
       communication on electronic mailing lists, source code control systems,
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
       designated in writing by the copyright owner as "Not a Contribution."
 
       "Contributor" shall mean Licensor and any individual or Legal Entity
-      on behalf of whom a Contribution has been received by Licensor and
+      on behalf of whom a Contribution has been received by the Licensor and
       subsequently incorporated within the Work.
 
    2. Grant of Copyright License. Subject to the terms and conditions of
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
       (except as stated in this section) patent license to make, have made,
       use, offer to sell, sell, import, and otherwise transfer the Work,
       where such license applies only to those patent claims licensable
-      by such Contributor that are necessarily infringed by their
+      by such Contributors that are necessarily infringed by their
       Contribution(s) alone or by combination of their Contribution(s)
       with the Work to which such Contribution(s) was submitted. If You
       institute patent litigation against any entity (including a
@@ -114,17 +114,17 @@
           within a display generated by the Derivative Works, if and
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-          do not modify the License. You may add Your own attribution
+          do not modify the License. You may add Your attribution
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-      You may add Your own copyright statement to Your modifications and
+      You may add Your copyright statement to Your modifications and
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-      reproduction, and distribution of the Work otherwise complies with
+      reproduction and distribution of the Work otherwise complies with
       the conditions stated in this License.
 
    5. Submission of Contributions. Unless You explicitly state otherwise,
@@ -141,13 +141,13 @@
       origin of the Work and reproducing the content of the NOTICE file.
 
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+      agreed to in writing, the Licensor provides the Work (and each
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@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@
       and charge a fee for, acceptance of support, warranty, indemnity,
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+      on Your behalf and Your sole responsibility, not on behalf
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@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@
 
 The Bisheng is licensed under the Apache License 2.0, with the following additional conditions:
 
-1. Bisheng is permitted to be used for commercialization. You can use Bisheng as a "backend-as-a-service" for your other applications, or delivering it to enterprises as an application development platform. However, when the following conditions are met, you must contact the producer to obtain a commercial license:
+1. Bisheng is permitted to be used for commercialization. You can use Bisheng as a "backend-as-a-service" for your other applications, or deliver it to enterprises as an application development platform. However, when the following conditions are met, you must contact the producer to obtain a commercial license:
 
 a. Multi-tenant SaaS service: Unless explicitly authorized by Bisheng in writing, you may not use the Bisheng source code to operate a multi-tenant SaaS service that is similar to the Bisheng.
 b. LOGO and copyright information: In the process of using Bisheng, you may not remove or replace the LOGO or copyright information in the Bisheng console.
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ b. Can be used for commercial purposes, such as Bisheng's cloud business.
 
 Apart from this, all other rights and restrictions follow the Apache License 2.0. If you need more detailed information, you can refer to the full version of Apache License 2.0.
 
-The interactive design of this product is protected by appearance patent.
+The interactive design of this product is protected by an appearance patent.
 
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