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-I'm Mansoor,  Site Reliability Engineer @Spotify. I like to build scalable infrastructure in the Cloud. My interests also include
-tech, science, infosec, foss, travel and what have you. I sometimes write in [my tech blog](/blog). I should probably be more
-consistent. I also have a [YouTube channel](https://www.youtube.com/@esc-sh) I am hoping to get back to this year
+I'm Mansoor,  Site Reliability Engineer @Spotify. I like to build scalable systems in the Cloud. My interests also include tech, science, infosec, foss, travel and what have you. I sometimes write in [my tech blog](/blog). I should probably be more consistent. I also have a [YouTube channel](https://www.youtube.com/@esc-sh) I am hoping to get back to this year
 
 Here are some of the social links
 
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 I use Github Actions to build and publish the site to Github Pages.
 
 ### Privacy
-I don't run any ads in this site. I use Cloudflare to serve the site and use a self hosted Plausible instance to host a simple
-analytics service to count the number of visitors. I don't share it with anyone (I don't even look at it myself most of the time)
+I don't run any ads in this site. I use Cloudflare to serve the site and use a self hosted Plausible instance to host a simple analytics service to count the number of visitors. I don't share it with anyone (I don't even look at it myself most of the time)
 
 If you do not wish to be tracked in any way, use Privacy Badger (which should block the Cloudflare tracker) and add `https://plaus.esc.sh/js/script.js` to your adblocker block list.