Update LIT7068Emazatekat.xml (#1327)

Corrections and undates
BetaMasaheft · Nov 27, 2024 · 608c59e · 608c59e
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diff --git a/new/LIT7068Emazatekat.xml b/new/LIT7068Emazatekat.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ type="application/xml" schematypens="http://purl.oclc.org/dsdl/schematron"?>
         <fileDesc>
             <titleStmt>
                 <title xml:lang="gez" xml:id="t1">እመ፡ ዘትካት፡ ሰከብኪ፡ ጎለ፡ አልሕምት፡</title>
-                <title xml:lang="gez" type="normalized" corresp="#t1">ʾƎmma za-tǝkāt sakabki gola ʾalḥǝmt (Qǝne of mawaddǝs type)</title>
+                <title xml:lang="gez" type="normalized" corresp="#t1">ʾƎmma za-tǝkāt sakabki gola ʾalḥǝmt (Qǝne of mawaddǝs-type)</title>
                 <title xml:lang="en" corresp="#t1">If you sleep in the stall of cows of the past ...</title>
                 <editor role="generalEditor" key="AB"/>
                 <editor key="DN"/>
@@ -32,7 +32,8 @@ type="application/xml" schematypens="http://purl.oclc.org/dsdl/schematron"?>
         <profileDesc>
             <creation/>
             <abstract>
-                <p>Neither author nor <term key="Qene">qǝne</term> type are indicated in the manuscript; possibly of <term key="Mawaddes">mawaddǝs</term> type (eight verses).</p>
+                <p>Neither the author nor the <term key="Qene">qǝne</term> type are indicated in the manuscript; 
+                    possibly of <term key="Mawaddes">mawaddǝs</term>-type (eight verses).</p>
             </abstract>
             <textClass>
                 <keywords>
@@ -49,7 +50,8 @@ type="application/xml" schematypens="http://purl.oclc.org/dsdl/schematron"?>
             </langUsage>
         </profileDesc>
         <revisionDesc>
-            <change who="DN" when="2024-09-09">Created entity</change>
+            <change who="DN" when="2024-09-09">created entity</change>
+            <change who="DN" when="2024-11-26">corrected according to the information supplied by Nafisa Valieva</change>
         </revisionDesc>
     </teiHeader>
     <text>
@@ -64,14 +66,14 @@ type="application/xml" schematypens="http://purl.oclc.org/dsdl/schematron"?>
                         <note>The text is taken from <ref type="mss" corresp="BNFabb145"/>, fol. 56vc 
                             (division into verses is indicated with the four dot asterisk ።; the end of the poem is indicated with the double four dot asterisk ። ።).</note>
                         <ab>                                                  
-                            <l n="1">እመ፡ ዘትካት፡ ሰ<supplied reason="undefined" resp="DN">ከብ</supplied>ኪ፡ ጎለ፡ አልሕምት፡ ዘበክሣድኪ፡ <gap reason="illegible" unit="chars" quantity="2"/>ቅል፡ ምጽላለ፡ ኖሎት፡ ቃማ።</l> 
-                            <l n="2"><supplied reason="undefined" resp="DN">አ</supplied>ጥር፡ ብኪ፡ ተዋርዶተ፡ ቤቴል፡ <supplied reason="undefined" resp="DN">ፃማ፡</supplied></l>
+                            <l n="1">እመ፡ ዘትካት፡ ስምኪ፡ ጎለ፡ አልሕምት፡ ዘበክሣድኪ፡ ሐቅል፡ ምጽላለ፡ ኖሎት፡ ቃማ።</l> 
+                            <l n="2">ኢንፈጥር፡ ብኪ፡ ተዋርዶተ፡ ቤቴል፡ ፃማ፡</l>
                             <l n="3">ወእመ፡ ገነት፡ ዘትካት፡ ስማ።</l>  
-                            <l n="4"><gap reason="illegible" unit="chars" quantity="2"/>ደ፡ ተልዕሎ፡ ኢናቀውማ።</l>
-                            <l n="5">ደብ<supplied reason="undefined" resp="DN">ረ፡ ጊ</supplied>ዮርጊስ፡ ከማኪ፡ ለሶዶም፡ ሀገረ፡ <supplied reason="undefined" resp="DN">ዘ</supplied>ማ።</l>
-                            <l n="6">እምኔኪ፡ መንገለ፡ ሰም<supplied reason="undefined" resp="DN">ዑ</supplied>፡ ጽራኃ፡ መላእክት፡ በዜማ።</l>
-                            <l n="7">ወእ<supplied reason="undefined" resp="DN">ምኔ</supplied>ሃ፡ መንገለ፡ ሰምዑ፡ ጽራኃ፡ ወ<supplied reason="undefined" resp="JK">ራዙ</supplied>ት፡ እለ፡ በግርማ።</l>
-                            <l n="8">አኮኑ፡ ሥላሴ፡ <gap reason="illegible" unit="chars" quantity="2"/> ዝነሙ፡ ከመ፡ ዓቅምኪ፡ ወዓቅ<gap reason="illegible"  unit="chars" quantity="1"/>፡ ለኪ፡ መና፡ ሙሴ፡ ወባቲ፡ እሳተ፡ <gap reason="illegible" unit="chars" quantity="2"/>ማ።</l>
+                            <l n="4">በዓውደ፡ ተልዕሎ፡ ኢናቀውማ።</l>
+                            <l n="5">ደብረ፡ ጊዮርጊስ፡ ከማኪ፡ ለሶዶም፡ ሀገረ፡ ዘማ።</l>
+                            <l n="6">እምኔኪ፡ መንገለ፡ ስምዑ፡ ጽራኃ፡ መላእክት፡ በዜማ።</l>
+                            <l n="7">ወእምኔሃ፡ መንገለ፡ ስምዑ፡ ጽራኃ፡ ወራዙት፡ እለ፡ በግርማ።</l>
+                            <l n="8">አኮኑ፡ ሥላሴ፡ አዝነሙ፡ ከመ፡ ዓቅምኪ፡ ወዓቅማ፡ ለኪ፡ መና፡ ሙሴ፡ ወባቲ፡ እሳተ፡ ራማ።</l>
                         </ab>
 
                     </div>