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Wordsmith "2. We help organizations extract maximum value from the hybrid cloud" #65

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kattekrab opened this issue Mar 24, 2022 · 1 comment

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kattekrab commented Mar 24, 2022 •

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#17 is live!
https://rht-labs.com/docs/how-we-differentiate.html

Can we wordsmith this line, cos it's a bit long?

We help organizations extract maximum value from the hybrid cloud

Organizations and hybrid cloud are important here, so is there a shorter way to express "extract maximum value"?

Maybe...
"We help organizations maximise the value of the hybrid cloud"
"We help organizations maximise value with the hybrid cloud"

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kattekrab commented Mar 24, 2022

@mwalker5000 how about this?

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