diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index f5fab0e..d243394 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -41,7 +41,6 @@
         <!--CSS link-->
         <link rel="stylesheet" href="./CSS/style.css">
     </head>
-
     <body>
         <nav class="navbar navbar-expand-lg bg-body-tertiary" id="#top">
             <div class="container-fluid">
@@ -186,8 +185,8 @@ <h1>The final prototype that solved the problem</h1>
           <div>
             <ul>
               <p>The end result wound up being a need for curated content via an updated navigation bar for better clarity:   </p>
-              <li>an updated landing page with simplified navigation in two forms</li>
-              <li>3 sub curated homepages so as to best provide new and exhausting users with the fastest access to all the information they would need as it pertains to the main users.</li>
+              <li>An updated landing page with simplified navigation in two forms.</li>
+              <li>Three new curated "homepages" for users to best provide both common and new/one-time users with the fastest access to all the information they would need.</li>
             </ul>
             
             <div  class="columnInfo">
@@ -200,22 +199,22 @@ <h1>The final prototype that solved the problem</h1>
           </div>
 
           <div class="rowOfInfoCon">
-            <p>below are rough overviews of the pages in their entirety as redesigned for web and mobile use with RWD for various sizes.</p>
+            <p>Below are rough overviews of the pages in their entirety as redesigned for web and mobile use with RWD for various sizes.</p>
            <img src="./images/Screenshot 2024-04-29 230644 1.png" alt="">
            <img src="./images/mobile version.png" alt="">
           </div> 
 
           <div class="rowOfInfoCon">
-            <p>Below are close ups of the mobile equivalent pages.</p>
+            <p>Below are close ups of the mobile equivalent pages with the alternate main menu pop-up display of said pages.</p>
            <img src="./images/mobileCuratedFinal.png" alt="">
            <img src="./images/mobileGeneralFinal.png" alt="">
           </div>
 
           <div class="columnInfo">
-            <h3>Final thoughts and notes for future iterations: </h3>
+           <p>Final thoughts and notes for future iterations: Though there were more problems than I could fix I did what I could to work on base key information structuring and organization while minimizing overload, though it became a bit text-heavy as I did not have time to develop proper infographics. </p>
            <img src="./images/working-at-night.png" alt="">
            <ul>
-             <li>this is a much bigger job than an individual can take on all at once, i'd like to work in a team next time on this site.</li>
+             <li>This is a much bigger job than an individual can take on all at once, i'd like to work in a team next time on this site.</li>
              <li>A better home landing page</li>
              <li>Curated content pages for Students and parents, Teachers, and administrators for easier fact finding and navigation.</li>
              <li>A new visual overlay</li>
